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June 16, 2008
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May 15, 2007, 11:57:23 PM
:iconsilverpaw98:
Okey so
this took alot of effort!
I tried really hard with this to make it not look plasticly and fake so please tell me if it does look bad.
I took a stock image, so you can see that by following this [link] now i think there is a large change in the two pictures, it was wonderful stock to work with. I love the pose!

So yeah, opinions and please be honest i would like to improve on this area :)

Stock: :iconhypoxia-stock:

Edit: changed the orange tinge and the eyes a lil
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:iconmistajalil:
its great.. how'd you do the lips like that?
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:iconrichsr:
Looks good to me, well worked
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:iconlizeve:
~LizEve Jan 13, 2010  Student Photographer
this is really beautiful! one thing though is that the eyes look too intense, maybe if you soften the color a little it would look more real ;)

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:iconsilverpaw98:
Yes i meant to tone down the eye, but everytime i tried to upload that version it didn't work. I think it was lagging at the time and i never got round to editing it again :/
Thanks so much for the comment :)

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:icontravisleephoto:
Beautiful job! One thing you can change is to make the whites of the eyes whiter. Try to dodge the midtones then dissaturate them some.
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:iconsilverpaw98:
Thanks so much :)
I re-edited it a bit and fixed the eyes, i thought they stood out too much so i toned them down a little but dodged and burned them a little as well :)
i'll upload that one soon

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:icontomcatinlove:
its clean and clear photoshope..nice anyway
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:iconsilverpaw98:
Thanks

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:iconfurryfoto:
told you i loved this the other day looks great i also tried rotating it cw as if shes leaning on a wall and i think it gives a lot more impact (but im wierd) will let you see what i came up with laters :)

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:iconsilverpaw98:
(yes your wierd, but fun that way) Yeh i like your version, but when she's lying down it gives more of an innocent feel :)

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